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Many people accept that, now we live in a globalized world but not everyone agree that this is beneficial. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Many people accept that, now we live in a globalized world but not everyone agree that this is beneficial. bxmx3
The world and its dynamics are changing day in and out. Many countries across the globe are fast exchanging goods and service and exchanging business ideas and exploring each continent through trade and industrialization. Other people are of the view that it’s not beneficial whiles others has a strong believe that it’s of a good course. This essay will discuss both side and will give a stand at the conclusion. Obviously, we are in a globe world indeed, people travel the length and breath of the country to trade and do business with each other, exportation of Goods and other renewable and non-renewable resources. It help build the economy and generate income, which intends improve the standards of living of its members. On the contrary, a number of people quiet disagree with this view of being of much importance. Globalization on the other hand has breed many fraudulent actions, some being exportation of human labour at a cheaper price and infiltration of inferior goods all in the name of coming together to trade. Human Resources are displaced and maltreated and others left to their own faith in a different country. However, I think we are living in a globalized world indeed, technologies and cultural practices are interplayed and we are exposed to many good opportunities. We have the chance to learn new things from others which intends impact positively and improve our living conditions at a people. Although it comes with its own setbacks, I strongly believe it has more positive sides than the negatives.
The world and its dynamics are changing day in and out.
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countries across the globe are
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fast
exchanging
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goods
and service and exchanging business
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ideas
and exploring each continent through trade and industrialization.
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Other
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people
are of the view that it’s not beneficial whiles others has a strong
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believe
that it’s of a
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good
course. This essay will discuss both side and will give a stand at the conclusion.

Obviously
, we are in a globe world
indeed
,
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people
travel the length and breath of the country to trade and do business with each
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other
, exportation of
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Goods
and
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other
renewable and non-renewable resources. It
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help
build the economy and generate income, which intends
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improve
the standards of living of its members.

On the contrary
, a number of
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people
quiet disagree with this view of being of much importance. Globalization on the
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other
hand has
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breed
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many
fraudulent actions,
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some
being exportation of human
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labour
at a cheaper price and infiltration of inferior
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goods
all in the name of coming together to trade. Human Resources
are displaced
and maltreated
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and others
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left
to their
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own
faith in a
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different
country.

However
, I
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think
we are living in a globalized world
indeed
, technologies and cultural practices are
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interplayed and
we
are exposed
to
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many
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good
opportunities. We have the chance to learn new things from others which intends impact
positively
and
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improve
our living conditions at a
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people
. Although it
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comes
with its
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own
setbacks, I
strongly
believe it has more
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positive
sides than the negatives.
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IELTS essay Many people accept that, now we live in a globalized world but not everyone agree that this is beneficial.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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