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Describe an occasion when you got up very early.

Describe an occasion when you got up very early. 2Rygx
I will tell you about the time I wake up very early in the morning Well… I have to be honest with you, I'm not an early riser, I always sleep whenever I get a chance and I always study late. That's why I hardly ever get up before 7am. At first, I thought it was going to be so difficult since I never have to wake up before sunrise. I guess I was just so excited that even waking up early was not a challenge for a heavy sleeper like me!
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early in the morning

Well… I
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be honest with you, I'm not an early riser, I always sleep whenever I
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get
a chance and I always study late. That's why I hardly ever
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up
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before
7am. At
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, I
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it was going to be
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difficult
since I never
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have to
wake up
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before
sunrise. I guess I was
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just
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excited that even waking up early was not a challenge for a heavy sleeper like me!
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IELTS essay Describe an occasion when you got up very early.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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