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Many parents want to put pressure on children in career choices and other matters. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Many parents want to put pressure on children in career choices and other matters. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 26n0k

Introduction Numerous parents put pressure to children of their career or other problems. There are advantages are outweigh than disadvantages. On the one side, parental consent and on the other side personal wishes. That’s why, there some disagreements. Main body 1 One evident benefit to go to the parental aspirations, this is parental consent. Parents never offer their children anything bad and done not want them to live a poor life. They have been researching this profession for years, and they are talking about the drawbacks we may face in this profession. If the child chooses a parent's profession, it will provide more opportunities. Not repeating the mistakes they made, not having abundance experience and master class and so on. Main body 2 On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to go to the parental aspirations, it is the child's dissatisfaction with the parents. For the reason that, they do not work in a profession they want and imagine. They don’t even try to run it when they don’t want to. In a number of cases, they may even feel unhappy. Conclusion In conclusion, while there are plus points to choose parental professions, too much would be as a result.

Introduction

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 than disadvantages. On the one side, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 consent and on the other side personal wishes. That’s why, there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disagreements.

Main body 1

One evident benefit to go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 aspirations, this is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 consent. Parents never offer their children anything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 and done not want them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a poor life. They have been researching this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
 for years, and they are talking about the drawbacks we may face in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
. If the child chooses a parent's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
, it will provide more opportunities. Not repeating the mistakes they made, not having abundance experience and master This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on.

Main body 2

On the other hand
, there are obvious disadvantages to go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 aspirations, it is the child's dissatisfaction with the parents. For the reason that, they do not work in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
 they want and imagine. They don’t even try to run it when they don’t want to. In a number of cases, they may even feel unhappy.

Conclusion

In conclusion
, while there are plus points to choose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
professions
, too much would be as a result
. 