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Sustainable Development and living

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Sustainable living requires a lifestyle shift that must be adopted by individuals, businesses and government entities. Simply recycling when we think of it is not enough to change the destructive patterns that have already begun to take place as a result of over-consumption. A sustainable lifestyle takes into account eating, transportation, socialization, energy use, waste disposal and more. Simply put, being sustainable is meeting the needs of the present without compromising the ability of future generations to meet their own needs. Sustainability is not just an environmental issue; it’s also an economic one. Not only does one-fifth of the population have access to most of the planet’s environmental resources, we have access to most of the planet’s economical resources including education and healthcare. Sixty percent of the global south do not have access to basic sanitation and 25% do not have adequate housing. We have more jobs, more land and more information available to help us make decisions about our health and our families than most of the world. Unless standards of living change, inhabitants of developing nations will continue to be plagued by poverty and malnourishment, while their populations continue to grow. Sustainability can be part of the answer to alleviating poverty worldwide. Sustainability doesn’t just mean reducing energy use and emissions; it means increasing access to jobs, promoting responsible trade and decreasing poverty rates.
Sustainable living requires a lifestyle shift that
must
be adopted
by individuals, businesses and
government
entities.
Simply
recycling when we
think
of it is not
enough
to
change
the destructive patterns that have already begun to take place
as a result
of over-consumption. A sustainable lifestyle takes into account eating, transportation, socialization, energy
use
, waste disposal and more.
Simply
put, being sustainable is meeting the needs of the present without compromising the ability of future generations to
meet
their
own
needs. Sustainability is not
just
an environmental issue; it’s
also
an economic one. Not
only
does one-fifth of the population have
access
to most of the planet’s environmental resources, we have
access
to most of the planet’s
economical
resources including education and healthcare. Sixty percent of the global south do not have
access
to basic sanitation and 25% do not have adequate housing. We have more jobs, more land and more information available to
help
us
make
decisions about our health and our families than most of the world.

Unless standards of living
change
, inhabitants of developing nations will continue to
be plagued
by poverty and malnourishment, while their populations continue to grow. Sustainability can be part of the answer to alleviating poverty worldwide. Sustainability doesn’t
just
mean reducing energy
use
and emissions; it means increasing
access
to jobs, promoting responsible trade and decreasing poverty rates.
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IELTS essay Sustainable Development and living

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
226 words
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