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Many of today most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation

Many of today most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation 7WlEk
it is concerned that many people believe that these days there are various affairs all over the world which can be solved by a global aid. according to my perspective I completely agree with the statement this issue like a population and health question can be solved by the cooperation. this essay will discuss my view in the forthcoming paragraph. To commence with, there are multivarious reasons why I think the most primary concern is pollution which is not a problem of a single country. it is faced by all over the world when the higher authority of all society together and discuss complication and then they can find a solution to tackle this issue. For instance a meeting conducted by Canada prime minister in with the authorities of 5 different state in which they discussed about the nuclear power and find that nuclear power does not harm anybody. Moreover, the second concern is health issue there are so many ailment which cannot be treated well by developing Nation. developed countries have a lot of sources of medicine and also expert scientists who can easily find solution to diseases and can share the medicine the florishing country. For instance, In April 2021covid19 wave 2 came in India in which more than 10 lakh people got affected and 5 lakh folks died. At this time president of America came forward to help india with 2 lakh vaccination, masks and PPE kits. This is really an appreciable moment for the USA. In conclusion, this is really necessary things. All nations to solve urgent problems such as pollution and health.
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that
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many
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people
believe that these days there are various affairs all over the world which can
be solved
by a global aid.
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according
to my perspective I completely
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agree
with the statement this issue like a population and health question can
be solved
by the cooperation.
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this
essay will discuss my view in the forthcoming paragraph. To commence with, there are
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multivarious
reasons why I
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think
the most primary concern is pollution which is not a problem of a single country.
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it
is faced
by all over the world when the higher authority of all society together and discuss
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complication and
then they can find a solution to tackle this issue.
For instance
a meeting conducted by Canada prime minister in with the authorities of 5
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different
state in which they
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discussed about the
nuclear power and find that nuclear power does not harm anybody.
Moreover
, the second concern is health issue there are
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so
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many ailment
which cannot
be treated
well by developing Nation.
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developed
countries have
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a lot of
sources of medicine and
also
expert scientists who can
easily
find solution to diseases and can share the medicine the
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florishing
country.
For instance
, In April 2021covid19 wave 2 came in India in which more than 10 lakh
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people
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got
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affected
and 5 lakh folks
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died
. At this time president of America came forward to
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help
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india
with 2 lakh vaccination, masks and PPE kits. This is
really
an appreciable moment for the USA.
In conclusion
, this is
really
necessary things. All nations to solve urgent problems such as pollution and health.

IELTS essay Many of today most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation

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267 words
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