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MANY MUSEUM CHARGE FOR ADMISSION WHILE OTHERS ARE FREE DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OF CHARGING PEOPLE FOR ADMISSION TO MUSEUMS OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES

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In this modern era museum contains lot of our history, which is important for people to see. This essay we will discuss the merit and demits of charging fee for public to see museums. in my opinion charging fee has to be imposed followed by my opinion in upcoming paragraph. In my opinion charging fee for museum is important because museum which charge money will have lot of facilities like information of ancient things, guides who explaining about history of materials to public, place will be properly cleaned by workers, security will be maintained. Money which is charged by public will be given to this workers and guides. For instance in this pandemic situations museums need money for sanitisation and cleaning, materials bought through money which are for in the form of admission fee. People feel save to come to this kind of museum because they have paid for security for them, permission will be cleaned and guide works hard to explain about ancient things to people to satisfy their money.
In this modern era
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museum
contains
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lot of
our history, which is
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important
for
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people
to
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see
. This essay we will discuss the merit and
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demits
of charging
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fee
for public to
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see
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museums
.
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in
my opinion charging
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fee
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has to
be imposed
followed by my opinion in upcoming paragraph.

In my opinion charging
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fee
for
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museum
is
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important
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because
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museum
which charge
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money
will have
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lot of
facilities like information of ancient things, guides who explaining about history of materials to public, place will be
properly
cleaned by workers, security will
be maintained
.
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Money
which
is charged
by public will be
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given
to
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this
workers and guides.
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in this pandemic situations
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museums
need
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money
for
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sanitisation
and cleaning, materials
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bought
through
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money
which are for in the form of admission
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fee
.
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People
feel
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save
to
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come
to this kind of
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museum
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because
they have paid for security for them, permission will
be cleaned
and guide works
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hard
to
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explain
about ancient things to
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people
to satisfy their
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money
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IELTS essay MANY MUSEUM CHARGE FOR ADMISSION WHILE OTHERS ARE FREE DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OF CHARGING PEOPLE FOR ADMISSION TO MUSEUMS OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
171 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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