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Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English. Is this a positive or negative development?

Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English. Is this a positive or negative development? pR3j0
There is a great threat of regional vernacular going extinct with global languages on rise. In my opinion it is a positive development. This essay will discuss A great number of languages are derived from a culture and ethos of a tribe. Loosing them will cremate a part of human history and possibility of termination of some indigenous traditions. Many rituals are handed down in their native tongue, due to which a discrepancy in their life style can be expected. For example, India with many cultures is a home to 22 recognized languages and hundreds of various dialects and unrecognized languages. In the past decade, with assimilation and learning of Hindi and English, there have been dearth of speakers for few of those and forcing them to become antiquated. Over the time, youngsters follow global and national trends instead of local ones, putting the cultures at risk. Although there is necessity of preservation due to aforementioned reasons, the progress that could be witnessed by learning English cannot be overlooked. It has become a universal and working language; focus is on mastering it right from the childhood which can benefit them immensely and present good career opportunities. As local languages are not widely spoken, the benefits are limited to that specific region. Proficiency in a language is largely spoken by most of the world, opens new opportunities to travel and settle down where the living conditions are second to none. In conclusion, it is inevitable that small languages would disappear and it is positive from the perspective of utility to others. It would be largely appreciated if there is way to conserve the ancient way of life and their lingo.
There is a great threat of regional vernacular going extinct with global
languages
on rise. In my opinion it is a
positive
development. This essay will
discuss


A great number of
languages
are derived
from a culture and ethos of a tribe. Loosing them will cremate a part of human history and possibility of termination of
some
indigenous traditions.
Many
rituals
are handed
down in their native tongue, due to which a discrepancy in their life style can be
expected
.
For example
, India with
many
cultures is a home to 22 recognized
languages
and hundreds of various dialects and unrecognized
languages
. In the past decade, with assimilation and learning of Hindi and English, there have been dearth of speakers for few of those and forcing them to become antiquated. Over the time, youngsters follow global and national trends
instead
of local ones, putting the cultures at
risk
.

Although there is necessity of preservation due to aforementioned reasons, the progress that could
be witnessed
by learning English cannot
be overlooked
. It has become a universal and working
language
; focus is on mastering it right from the childhood which can benefit them
immensely
and present
good
career opportunities. As local
languages
are not
widely
spoken, the benefits
are limited
to that specific region. Proficiency in a
language
is
largely
spoken by most of the world, opens new opportunities to travel and settle down where the living conditions are second to none.

In conclusion
, it is inevitable that
small
languages
would disappear and it is
positive
from the perspective of utility to others. It would be
largely
appreciated if there is way to conserve the ancient way of life and their lingo.
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IELTS essay Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English. Is this a positive or negative development?

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