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Many individuals do not work out or play any sport due to busy schedule or despite of having time. Lack of exercise results in many problem related to physical and mental health. What are the problems caused by this? Provide some solutions to solve this?

Many individuals do not work out or play any sport due to busy schedule or despite of having time. Lack of exercise results in many problem related to physical and mental health. What are the problems caused by this? Provide some solutions to solve this? 7JdwX
For being fit and healthy, physical exercises paly an essential role in everyone's life, yet number of people does not do exercises such as noteworthy reasons, which leads to numerous problems related to physical and mental health. This essay will articulate some of the problems caused by this and propose some possible solutions to alleviate this. Initially, number of people nowadays avoid doing physical exercise because of their busy schedule and results in numerous problems such as obesity, depression and plethora more, whereas obesity is the and most problem, and suffered by individuals of all age groups. To elaborate it, individuals eat more calories and does not do physical activities to burn it; as a result individuals are getting fat and becomes chubby. To illustrate, survey was conducted by world health organization and revealed that, more than 80% of population of whole world is suffering from the problem of bulkiness because the people does not do workouts and exercise. Moreover, the second problem which is also suffered by people because of not doing workouts is depression, and 75% of population of world is suffering from this. To mitigate with this problems, there are number of solutions. Adoption of healthy lifestyle. To elucidate, as healthy lifestyle include exercises, balanced and food full of nutrition. Exercises help to burn excess of calories which helps to reduce fat; similarly balanced diet help to maintain body fat. Regular physical exercise and have healthy diet both are the effective way to mitigate with health related problems. To epitome, government of USA revealed that, 80% of population of America is physically fit and more active as they have adopted healthy lifestyle. To recapitulate, although plethora of problems are caused by not doing workouts and physical activities, yet I believe that these problems can be resolved with the help of government and by adopting healthy life.
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paly
an essential role in everyone's life,
yet
number of
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people
does not do
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exercises
such as noteworthy reasons, which leads to numerous
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problems
related to
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physical
and mental health. This essay will articulate
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some of the
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problems
caused by this and propose
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some
possible solutions to alleviate this.

Initially
, number of
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people
nowadays avoid doing
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physical
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exercise
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because
of their busy schedule and results in numerous
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problems
such as obesity, depression and plethora more, whereas obesity is the and most
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problem
, and suffered by individuals of all age groups. To elaborate it, individuals eat more calories and does not do
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physical
activities to burn it;
as a result
individuals are getting
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fat
and becomes chubby. To illustrate, survey
was conducted
by
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world health organization
and revealed that, more than 80% of population of whole world is suffering from the
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problem
of bulkiness
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because
the
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people
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people
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of not doing workouts is depression, and 75% of population of world is suffering from this.

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this
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, there are number of solutions. Adoption of
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healthy
lifestyle. To elucidate, as
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healthy
lifestyle include
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exercises
, balanced and food full of nutrition.
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Exercises
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help
to burn excess of calories which
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helps
to
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reduce
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fat
;
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balanced diet
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help
to maintain body
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fat
. Regular
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physical
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exercise
and have
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healthy
diet both are the effective way to mitigate with health related
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problems
. To epitome,
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government
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of USA
revealed that, 80% of population of America is
physically
fit and more active as they have adopted
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healthy
lifestyle.

To recapitulate, although plethora of
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problems
are caused
by not doing workouts and
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physical
activities,
yet
I believe that these
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problems
can
be resolved
with the
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help
of
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government
and by adopting
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healthy
life.
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IELTS essay Many individuals do not work out or play any sport due to busy schedule or despite of having time. Lack of exercise results in many problem related to physical and mental health. What are the problems caused by this? Provide some solutions to solve this?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
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