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Many governments of the worlds are facing corruption charges. Should there be military rule in such countries? What do you think? Write your opinion within 200-300 words.

Many governments of the worlds are facing corruption charges. Should there be military rule in such countries? What do you think? Write your opinion within 200-300 words. ABQNl
Nowadays, the importance of the corruption charges which was always debatable has now become more controversial. It can be strongly agreed the fact of this matter has some convincing arguments, despite the contentions about it. In this essay, I will elaborate my point of view on the given notion in the forthcoming paragraph before drawing a reasonable conclusion. To begin with, there are numerous reasons why many governments of the worlds are facing corruption charges that have some negative aspects among the citizens. I believe the military rules is a perfect decision for every government works because citizen can get a great chance of the honest work in every field and save their human rights. For example, research in this area invariably shows that poor people cannot be disappointed from government policy if military rule starts in such countries. Therefore, the importance of human right is undeniable. Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that build trust among people through the military rules because the number of people believes in the military because according to their strict rule and regulation as well as they work and time importance. For instance, the government employees opine through the interviews they need to strict rules for every work fields which help to every person. For this reason, the importance of public trust is untenable. After analysing the above discussion, it can be concluded that trust and human right is significant the government works.
Nowadays, the
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importance
of the corruption charges which was always debatable has
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now
become more controversial. It can be
strongly
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agreed
the fact of this matter has
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some
convincing arguments, despite the contentions about it. In this essay, I will elaborate my point of view on the
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given
notion in the forthcoming paragraph
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before
drawing a reasonable conclusion.

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with, there are numerous reasons why
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many
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governments
of the worlds are facing corruption charges that have
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some
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negative
aspects among the citizens. I believe the military
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rules
is a perfect decision for every
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government
works
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because
citizen can
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get
a great chance of the honest
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work
in every field and save their human rights.
For example
, research in this area
invariably
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shows
that poor
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people
cannot be
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disappointed from
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government
policy if military
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rule
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starts
in such countries.
Therefore
, the
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importance
of human right is undeniable.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that build trust among
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people
through the military
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rules
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because
the number of
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people
believes in the military
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because
according to their strict
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rule
and regulation
as well
as they
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work
and time
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importance
.
For instance
, the
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government
employees opine through the interviews they need to strict
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rules
for every
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work
fields which
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help
to every person.
For this reason
, the
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importance
of public trust is untenable.

After
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analysing
the above discussion, it can
be concluded
that trust and human right is significant the
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government
works.
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IELTS essay Many governments of the worlds are facing corruption charges. Should there be military rule in such countries? What do you think? Write your opinion within 200-300 words.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
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