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Is that fair the breaking up to boyfriend because of his drug problem?

Is that fair the breaking up to boyfriend because of his drug problem? BlQpj
After all the fail relationships I found my soulmate. I (27f) love him (25m) so much. (We have long distance relationship. He is in UK and Im in Turkey) I respect him so much because he is clever, strong, kind and amazing person. I wanna live with him, I wanna see his face every single morning just next to me. He also super nice boy to be friend. But his around almost full of losers(junkies). Therefore, he acting like loser, he does not wanna lose them. He is quite naive about social relationships. For instance, If I realise something hurting me or toxic for me, I can cut suddenly everything even with my best friend which is I did this couple of time because I love myself. But he cannot doing this because he is afraid of being alone. I cannot support him bcz Im not there. But he should realise his own value. (Btw I’m in relationship with him because he told me he wants to stop about drugs and I believed him. ) But now I’m losing my respect to him. Because using drugs for happiness such a loser thing for me. Today, I even don’t wanna call him. I feel guilty about this. So please tell me what should I do? Am I selfish?
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
all the fail
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relationships
I found my soulmate. I (27f)
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love
him (
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25m
)
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so
much. (We have long
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distance
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relationship
. He is in UK and
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Im
in Turkey) I respect him
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so
much
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because
he is clever, strong, kind and amazing person. I
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wanna
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live
with him, I
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wanna
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see
his face every single morning
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just
next
to me. He
also
super nice boy to be
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friend
.
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But
his around almost full of losers(junkies).
Therefore
,
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he acting
like loser, he does not
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wanna
lose them. He is quite naive about social
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relationships
.
For instance
, If I
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realise
something hurting me or toxic for me, I can
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cut
suddenly
everything even with my best friend which is I did this couple of time
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because
I
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love
myself.
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But
he cannot
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doing
this
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because
he is afraid of being alone. I cannot support him
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bcz
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Im
not there.
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But
he should
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realise
his
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value. (
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Btw
I’m in
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relationship
with him
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because
he
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told
me he wants to
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stop
about drugs and I believed him.
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)
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But
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now
I’m losing my respect to him.
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Because
using drugs for happiness such a loser thing for me.
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Today
, I even don’t
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wanna
call him. I feel guilty about this.
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So
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please
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tell
me what should I do? Am I selfish?
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IELTS essay Is that fair the breaking up to boyfriend because of his drug problem?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
217 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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