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Many countries want to host international sportsevents,while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many countries want to host international sportsevents, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits. O9Kd
Lots of countries announce international sports events, while some nations do not organise sports events. There are more benefits than drawbacks to host countries and some countries have losses as well. This essay will discuss that it is more beneficial to countries who organise the international sports events. Countries who host international sports events like Olympic games have more benefits in terms of marketing of that particular city of the country, increase in tourism industry and the world’s finest sporting venues and so on. Many tourists visit host country and explore it. For example, Barcelona put on the global map due to successfully host Olympic games. Moreover, sports events attract many tourists and businesses to invest in that country. For these reasons, more countries are desiring for international sports events for their country’s growth. Conversely, some of the countries are not ready to invest money by hosting international sports events such as Olympic. These countries think that after the Olympic games, stadiums will be left unused, during the sports event may local public face inconvenience and congestion. Due to these some public may riot for wasted money on sports event rather than country’s development, and international sports event may be unsuccessful too. For instance, the Olympic stadiums after the games are useless. In addition, host cities may have to bear losses from unsuccessful sports events such as Montreal and Athens are examples of unsuccessful sports events. Moreover, the money which is invested on the games are inefficient after the games get over. In conclusion, most countries believe in hosting international sports event to gain popularity worldwide unlike the some of the countries do not support international sports event for their internal issues with the public. Ultimately, host countries open up their ways of growing economy.
Lots of
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countries
announce
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international
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sports
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events
, while
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some
nations do not
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organise
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sports
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events
. There are more benefits than drawbacks to
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host
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countries
and
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some
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countries
have losses
as well
. This essay will discuss that it is more beneficial to
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countries
who
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organise
the
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international
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sports
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events
.

Countries who
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host
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international
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sports
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events
like Olympic
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games
have more benefits in terms of marketing of that particular city of the
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country
, increase in tourism industry and the world’s finest sporting venues and
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so
on.
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Many
tourists visit
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host
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country
and explore it.
For example
, Barcelona put on the global map due to
successfully
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host
Olympic
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games
.
Moreover
,
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sports
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events
attract
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many
tourists and businesses to invest in that
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country
. For these reasons, more
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countries
are desiring for
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international
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sports
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events
for their
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country’s
growth.

Conversely
,
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some of the
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countries
are not ready to invest money by hosting
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international
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sports
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events
such as Olympic. These
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countries
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think
that after the Olympic
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games
, stadiums will be
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left
unused, during the
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sports
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event
may local public face inconvenience and congestion. Due to these
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some
public may riot for wasted money on
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sports
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event
rather
than
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country’s
development, and
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international
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sports
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event
may be unsuccessful too.
For instance
, the Olympic stadiums after the
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games
are useless.
In addition
,
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host
cities may
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have to
bear losses from unsuccessful
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sports
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events
such as Montreal and Athens are examples of unsuccessful
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sports
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events
.
Moreover
, the money which
is invested
on the
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games
are inefficient after the
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games
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get
over.

In conclusion
, most
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countries
believe in hosting
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international
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sports
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event
to gain popularity worldwide unlike the
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some of the
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countries
do not support
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international
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sports
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event
for their internal issues with the public.
Ultimately
,
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host
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countries
open up their ways of growing economy.
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IELTS essay Many countries want to host international sportsevents, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.

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