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Advantages and disadvantages studying abroad

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The youngsters are crazy about having knowledge in foreign countries in our modern life. Although almost everyone can bump into problems in distant or having great career. There are good grounds for arguing about studying abroad. The basic invaluable side is about having the best advanced experiences. Most people having it by studying and exchanging the ideas with various people. Another advantage is about assisting to develop their motherland according to the new experience. One of these is that Chinese. Several part of their students studying abroad and helping their own country that's why they are highly developed. Equally there is also disadvantages being abroad. The youngsters after graduation keeping their career where they are studied. It is big harm to their own country. They have to comeback and doing well balanced activities to develop their country this is particularly important. Around the globe 35% people emigrating in the future it can highly increased and the problem should be solved by the government. To conclude that there are more basic advantages in topic. In modern world we are having big chances to studying abroad and it should be proven by students respectively.
The youngsters are crazy about
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knowledge in foreign
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countries
in our modern life. Although almost everyone can bump into problems in distant or
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having
great career.

There are
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good
grounds for arguing about
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studying
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abroad
. The basic invaluable side is about
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having
the best advanced experiences. Most
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people
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having
it by
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studying
and exchanging the
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ideas
with various
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people
. Another advantage is about assisting to develop their motherland according to the new experience. One of these is that Chinese.
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of their students
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studying
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abroad
and helping their
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own
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country
that's why they are
highly
developed.

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Equally
there is
also
disadvantages being
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abroad
. The youngsters after graduation keeping their career where they
are studied
. It is
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big
harm to their
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own
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country
. They have
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to comeback
and doing
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well balanced
activities to develop their
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country
this is
particularly
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important
. Around the globe 35%
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people
emigrating in the future it can
highly
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increased
and the problem should
be solved
by the
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government
.

To conclude
that there are more basic advantages in topic. In modern world we are
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having
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big
chances to
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studying
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abroad
and it should
be proven
by students
respectively
.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages studying abroad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
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