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many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? oqNV
Crime related novels and TV dramas are definitely gaining more popularity because they depict a n unseen part of own world which exposes and confronts many of our own fears. This genre targets at bringing out the harsh realities of life, which in our country are mostly hidden. The novels and shows enlighten us of the various illegal activities that happen all around us, unknown to common man. Its popularity could be because of a lot of reasons. One of them being the portrayal of our force as life saviours and heroes in uniform. A common man feels safe and protected after watching crime being tacked by the officers, who in real life are mostly not on time. But seeing or reading of positive outcomes builds their trust while creating awareness of various common harms. Some TV shows like ‘Hoshiyaar’, had a great concept where they showed how crime could be stopped if necessary steps and precautions are taken at the right time. This show created a lot of buzz as it involved everyday situations, but it definitely helped people in staying alert and noticing irregular activities around them. In my opinion crime fiction and TV crime dramas are good if viewed in moderation. It can get pretty addictive and in turn make a person delusional. There have been a few incidents where people suspected innocent maids or family members influenced by the TC shows. This created a lot of misunderstanding and rifts too. On the other hand such shows need to be age limited and monitored as it can have a harsh effect on kids. Hence its best to avoid them when kids are around too. I would like to conclude by saying that in todays world where happy endings are more, people find solace and security through these books and shows despite knowing its just fiction, this increase its popularity.
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related novels and TV dramas are definitely gaining more popularity
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they depict
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world which exposes and confronts
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of our
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fears.

This genre targets at bringing out the harsh realities of life, which in our country are
mostly
hidden. The novels and
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shows
enlighten us of the various illegal activities that happen all around us, unknown to common
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man
. Its popularity could be
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because
of
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reasons. One of them being the portrayal of our force as life
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saviours
and heroes in uniform.

A common
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man
feels safe and protected after watching
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crime
being tacked
by the officers, who in real life are
mostly
not on time.
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But
seeing or reading of
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positive
outcomes builds their trust while creating awareness of various common harms.

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Some
TV
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shows
like ‘
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Hoshiyaar
’, had a great concept where they
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showed
how
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crime
could be
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stopped
if necessary steps and precautions
are taken
at the right time. This
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show
created
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as it involved everyday situations,
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but
it definitely
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helped
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people
in staying alert and noticing irregular activities around them.

In my opinion
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crime
fiction and TV
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crime
dramas are
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good
if viewed in moderation. It can
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get
pretty addictive and in turn
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make
a person delusional. There have been a few incidents where
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people
suspected innocent maids or family members influenced by the TC
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shows
. This created
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a lot of
misunderstanding and rifts too.
On the other hand
such
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shows
need to be age limited and monitored as it can have a harsh effect on kids.
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Hence
its best to avoid them when kids are around too.

I would like
to conclude
by saying that in
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todays
world where happy endings are more,
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people
find solace and security through these books and
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shows
despite knowing its
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just
fiction, this increase its popularity.
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IELTS essay many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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