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In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Ker0

The growth of population in the world has been raising drastically. Quite common fact towards the development of people life is in line with the quality and job they do. Nevertheless, people spending money for buying plethora of items will have an added advantage throughout their life in my perception. Moreover, trend of the nature is more demanding in style. Society attached with the nature likely to spend/ invest money to buy new things, which could lead them to make their lifestyle in comfortable and easier way. Owing to a fact, advertisement plays a vital role to brainstorm people mind. Which gradually end up by attracting towards buying the product. For instance, In order to convert the medium of solid food to paste level can be possible only by means of grinding stone. In addition, the amount of time and effort for the process are really makes someone in awful life. Furthermore, the revolution in the field of infrastructure, Technology turns society to be more demanded. Thus, switching individual to invest money to match up with the current world. To illustrate, with myself, introduction of a new I phone make me to switch over from the existing model. To sum up the statement, investing money to buy new products make each induvial make positive development in terms of the item we buy…

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money
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buy
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 up by attracting towards buying the product. For instance
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 someone in awful life.

Furthermore
, the revolution in the field of infrastructure, Technology turns society to be more demanded. Thus
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money
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current
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make
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