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Many countries importing products in order to produce them.

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Recent years, More and more countries have been revolutionizing and importing products instead of producing by themselves. Many head of states have idea of puchasing products rather than recreating or adapting them while goods can be fatal or unquality. This essay agrees with both views and determines them in the following following paragraphs Firstly, It is evident that the amount of money which seperated for importingcan be used in the sphere of construction or in educational system. However, it can be helpful for the economy of country such as school may be rebuilt or contryside part of the city can be boosted. It may be key for a great numbers of doors which can create opportunities to live. On the other hand, The number of countries which have contradicts with Goverment or with each other. They can utilize on purpose of bilogical gun which can cause for many types of health issues Unless, No one guarantee for the price of products. Anytime they are able to increase the cost of them. But they make contract with each other. For the solution to these problems By the way of conclusion, every country make imports due to issues in other sections of agriculture. Admittedly, each country can not supply itself by using own goods because of climate. Each country has own role in our flourishing world and connected firmly. In addition to these views, the reduction in number of unemployments can be sensed dramatically so the condition of country will be improved by government next coming decades.
Recent years, More and more
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countries
have been revolutionizing and importing products
instead
of producing by themselves.
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of states have
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idea
of
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puchasing
products
rather
than recreating or adapting them while
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goods
can be fatal or
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unquality
. This essay
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agrees
with both views and determines them in the
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following following
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paragraphs


Firstly
, It is evident that the amount of money which
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seperated
for
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importingcan
be
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used
in the sphere of construction or in educational system.
However
, it can be helpful for the economy of
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country
such as school may be rebuilt or
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contryside
part of the city can
be boosted
. It may be key for a great numbers of doors which can create opportunities to
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live
.

On the
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other
hand, The number of
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countries
which have contradicts with
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Goverment
or with each
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other
. They can utilize on purpose of
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bilogical
gun which can cause for
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many
types of health
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issues


Unless, No one guarantee for the price of products. Anytime they are able to increase the cost of them.
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But
they
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make
contract with each
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other
. For the solution to these
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problems


By the way of conclusion, every
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country
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make
imports due to issues in
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other
sections of agriculture.
Admittedly
, each
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country
can not supply itself by using
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own
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goods
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because
of climate. Each
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country
has
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own
role in our flourishing world and connected
firmly
.
In addition
to these views, the reduction in number of
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unemployments can
be sensed
dramatically
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so
the condition of
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country
will be
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improved
by
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government
next
coming decades.
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IELTS essay Many countries importing products in order to produce them.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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