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Is it important for a country to have festivals?

Is it important for a country to have festivals? kLbDW
Yes, I do believe that festivals are immensely important for a country and its people because of many reasons. Firstly, these celebrations represent the cultural and national identity of this country. Besides, festivals also attract international tourists and boost the tourism industry and of course, it affects to the national economic. Finally, working-class people need refreshments and vacations, and the festivals are great ways to refresh and invigorate ourselves from the monotonous daily routines that makes we feel stressed and tired. The important festivals also bring people together and eliminate the differences we have in our society about gender, race, religion, etc.
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IELTS essay Is it important for a country to have festivals?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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