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Many countries have same shops and products.Is this negative or positive development. Discuss on both the views and give your opinion.

Many countries have same shops and products. Is this negative or positive development. Discuss on both the views and give your opinion. 3Y1nl
Most of all countries have mandatory that supermarkets and products are having no differences. Some individuals opine that it is a pragmatic evolution, while other says it's a negative expansion. However, I will discuss both the sides and give my potential opinions in the subsequent paragraphs On the one side, as much as there is more evolution in the shops, therefore there is an additional product availability. Consequently, a consumer can easily get the products which fulfill his necessities. In case of that this happened, There is more and more shops and products are available in the short distance, in that the customers have to travel less and get sufficient products in the least time, so that it saves the time as well as fossil fuel. For instance, near my home in the radar of 5 miles (ca. 8 km), there are 14 supermarkets so whenever, I needed an emergency product, I will get that product effortlessly and Its less time-consuming. On other side of coin, if there is novelty in shops and products then entrepreneurs can introduce their new innovations. Furthermore, due to new products uneducated will suffer because they are unaware of this products and shops. For example, in online shopping human tend to buy well rated products and known brands only. Consequently, economic of countries will effect. To conclude, by keeping this above points in mind, in my opinion different countries should have different shops and products, because the pros of this outweigh the cons. So, this results in global market.
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products
are having no differences.
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Some
individuals opine that it is a pragmatic evolution, while other says it's a
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negative
expansion.
However
, I will discuss both the sides and give my potential opinions in the subsequent paragraphs

On the one side, as much as there is more evolution in the
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shops
,
therefore
there is an additional
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product
availability.
Consequently
, a consumer can
easily
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get
the
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products
which fulfill his necessities. In case of that this happened, There is more and more
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shops
and
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products
are available in the short distance, in that the customers
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have to
travel less and
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get
sufficient
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products
in the least time,
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so
that it saves the time
as well
as fossil fuel.
For instance
, near my home in the radar of 5 miles (ca. 8 km), there are 14 supermarkets
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so
whenever, I needed an emergency
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product
, I will
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get
that
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product
effortlessly
and Its less time-consuming.

On other side of coin, if there is novelty in
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shops
and
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products
then entrepreneurs can introduce their new innovations.
Furthermore
, due to new
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products
uneducated will suffer
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because
they are unaware of
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this
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products
and
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shops
.
For example
, in online shopping human tend to
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buy
well rated
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products
and known brands
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only
.
Consequently
, economic of countries will
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effect
.

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, by keeping this above points in mind, in my opinion
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different
countries should have
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different
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shops
and
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,
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, this results in global market.
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IELTS essay Many countries have same shops and products. Is this negative or positive development. Discuss on both the views and give your opinion.

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