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Some people think that it is better to take a gap year after graduating from school while others think that it is better to enter the university immediately after graduation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Some people think that it is better to take a gap year after graduating from school while others think that it is better to enter the university immediately after graduation. XERJP

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