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Many companies sponsors sports by advertising themselves some people think that this is a very good for words “while other thing that there are disadvantage discuss both views and give your opinion

Many companies sponsors sports by advertising themselves some people think that this is a very good for words “while other thing that there are disadvantage discuss both views and give your opinion XDy3O
The last two decades have seen numerous change in the market. Although by giving Great offer companies attracting the people for their product. Nowadays number of companies sponsor a sport by advertising that company‘s name some of public think it is a good offer for a word sports however, others believe there are disadvantage. In my opinions as a coin has a both side advantage and disadvantage this is topic there is a both side support the view will discuss in a further paragraph. To begin with the number of companies make the name into public into their products for example let me make beauty companies always make offer with the discount voucher and request public to upload the photo on social media by adding hastage Lakeme. In simple words sponsor sport event to promote their product. On the one hand number of people believe that this is a very good for a world sport special offer to membership people for example the Coca-Cola company sponsor sports T-shirt. In simple words public of nation always look for their advantage and companies take that advantage why these people get what they want and they companies also promote their brand. On the other hand the people who disagree with these they believe that companies take that situation and attract people for their brand but here are some of the people who doesn’t have membership they doesn’t get the free offers sometimes some people in the show of use that brand and burn their product there to disadvantage. In conclusion by discussing both views the way of people think it is a good for world sports it is the positive side although for other people it is a disadvantage in my view this as a board advantage and disadvantage it will be depend on a person which one they choose to.
The last two decades have
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companies
attracting the
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people
for their product. Nowadays number of
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companies
sponsor a
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sport
by advertising that
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company‘s
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public
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it is a
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good
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offer
for a word
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sports
however
, others believe there are
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disadvantage
. In my opinions as a coin has a both side
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advantage
and
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disadvantage
this is topic there is a both side support the view will discuss in a
further
paragraph.

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companies
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the name into
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public
into their products
for example
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offer
with the discount voucher and request
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public
to upload the photo on social media by adding
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Lakeme
. In simple words sponsor
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sport
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event
to promote their product.

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people
believe that this is a
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very
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good
for a world
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sport
special
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offer
to membership
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people
for example
the Coca-Cola
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company
sponsor
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sports
T-shirt. In simple words
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public
of nation always look for their
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and
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why these
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people
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what they
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want and
they
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also
promote their brand.

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the
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people
who disagree with these they believe that
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companies
take that situation and attract
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people
for their brand
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doesn’t
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that brand and burn their product there to
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disadvantage
.
In conclusion
by discussing both views the way of
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people
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it is a
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good
for world
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sports
it is the
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positive
side although for other
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people
it is a
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disadvantage
in my view this as a board
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advantage
and
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disadvantage
it will be
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depend
on a person which one they choose to.
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IELTS essay Many companies sponsors sports by advertising themselves some people think that this is a very good for words “while other thing that there are disadvantage discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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