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Many companies are moving to the countryside instead of staying in large cities. What are the advantages of this trend?

Many companies are moving to the countryside instead of staying in large cities. What are the advantages of this trend? PEWOw
Multiple companies are established in the village rather than cities. There are many merits of this trend, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. There are reams benefits what are the advantages of situating companies in the rural area? To begin with, the founders of the organisations get enough land for starting business because masses of the village have vast land for doing agriculture. In the village, majority of people go to towns for completing their higher study and doing employment. In this way, few people live in the village and exorbitant land is free. Therefore, individuals can extend their business due to plenty of openly land. Moreover, companies can easily get skilled and unskilled workers in the suburbs as most of the people are unemployed after eliciting higher study due to lacking job opportunities in the village. That is why, owners can aquire persons for constructing the companies such as labour, who have no aptitude. On the other hand business manager also achieve talents person for overcoming their business without any advertisment about vacancies in the business centre. Henceforth, organisations cannot face any problem related to less working people. To conclude, many business are constructed in the village because of engrossing land for expanding and setting up the factories. Beside this, founders of the companies can readily hire sufficient workers, who are educated and non - educated.
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go to towns for completing their higher study and doing employment. In this way, few
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skilled and unskilled workers in the suburbs as most of the
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land
for expanding and setting up the factories. Beside this, founders of the
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IELTS essay Many companies are moving to the countryside instead of staying in large cities. What are the advantages of this trend?

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