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Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree. v.4

Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. v. 4
Nowadays, public speaking artistry has become a part of our lifestyle. It has possible not lived in the world without the speaking skills, as every field where people go, they have to need speaking skills. More and more individuals come to deal some abilities as a speaking in public places. It is very essential to speak well in public spots to the people, who should be trained by the professional teachers from schools. I strongly agree with the given statement. I will discuss the some relevant causes of this phenomenon and add my specific conclusion in the following paragraphs. To begin with, there are many circumstances of this occur. Firstly, people know very well in the modern era, speaking skills has become a job, as many people want to apply the well paid job. That communication art, which stay connected to the people each other. Like us, they do not see their speaking skills. At the job centres, they have to face some problems. Secondly, teachers arrange the some events during the school period and they invite the students to take part in the functions. However, students do not practice a lot as well as audience reactions, because of this, they face quandary in the life. On the flip side, some experts should be trained by the schools for reducing this situation. First and foremost step is that, schools ought to be organised the events to take participate in team works. As a result, it will be very helpful for the pupils. To illustrate, they are able to learn something as a speaking experience, which enhance the ability of the kids. In addition to it, either they can opt lots of practice or collect the knowledge associated with the topics. By this way, it helps to modify the information on the life of a person. To sum up, even though many people cannot speak well in public places, yet they have more capability to speak about the topics in group work. So it is very important to learn about communication accomplishment at schools, which is known as the best place.
Nowadays,
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public
speaking artistry has become a part of our lifestyle. It has possible not
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lived
in the world without the speaking
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skills
, as every field where
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people
go, they
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have to
need speaking
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skills
. More and more individuals
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come
to deal
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some
abilities as a speaking in
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public
places. It is
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very
essential to speak
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well
in
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public
spots to the
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people
, who should
be trained
by the professional teachers from
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schools
. I
strongly
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agree
with the
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given
statement. I will discuss the
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some
relevant causes of this phenomenon and
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add
my specific conclusion in the following paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, there are
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many
circumstances of this occur.
Firstly
,
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people
know
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very
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well
in the modern era, speaking
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skills
has become a job, as
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many
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people
want to apply the
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well
paid job. That communication art, which stay connected to the
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people
each other. Like us, they do not
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see
their speaking
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skills
.
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At the job
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centres
, they
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have to
face
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some
problems.
Secondly
, teachers arrange the
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some
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events
during the
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school
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period and
they invite the students to
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take part
in the functions.
However
, students do not practice a lot as
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well
as audience reactions,
because of this
, they face quandary in the life.

On the flip side,
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some
experts should
be trained
by the
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schools
for reducing this situation.
First
and foremost step is that,
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schools
ought to be
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organised
the
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events
to take participate in team works.
As a result
, it will be
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very
helpful for the pupils. To illustrate, they are able to learn something as a speaking experience, which enhance the ability of the kids.
In addition
to it, either they can opt lots of practice or collect the knowledge associated with the topics. By this way, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to modify the information on the life of a person.

To sum up,
even though
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many
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people
cannot speak
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well
in
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public
places,
yet
they have more capability to speak about the topics in group work.
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So
it is
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very
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important
to learn about communication accomplishment at
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schools
, which
is known
as the best place.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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