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Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree. v.3

Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. v. 3
Public speaking and oratory are valuable skills that one should have. A good orator can easily win an argument, get their message across and enjoy immense popularity among people. Unfortunately, many people lack this skill and therefore there is an argument that it should be taught at schools. I agree with this view. In this essay, I shall explain why good public speaking skills are important in life. Predominantly, the major argument in favour of public speaking is that it develops one’s personality. When a person successfully delivers a good speech, it enhances his sense of self-worthiness. A positive response from the audience can help him to develop confidence. More than that, it improves relationships. A marked improvement can be seen in his interpersonal skills which, in turn, will help him maintain healthy relationships with friends, family and his colleagues at work. In addition, it acts as a stress buster for an individual and will help him overcome his stage fear or shyness. Therefore, it is clearly evident that public presentation  is beneficial for our society. Notably, good public speaking skills are essential for success in personal and professional life. I agree with the argument that they should be taught in schools. The standard school curriculum now focuses more on reading and writing. Consequently, speaking does not get the importance it deserves. This should change. Schools can organize various programmes that give students an opportunity to express their ideas in front of an audience. For example, there could be elocution and story telling competitions. Thus, it is comprehensible to consider that they should be made a part of the curriculum. Putting in the nutshell, the art of public speaking is very important in today’s scenario. If children acquire this skill, they will stand a much better chance in the highly competitive job market.
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speaking and oratory are valuable
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skills
that one should have. A
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good
orator can
easily
win an
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argument
,
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get
their message across and enjoy immense popularity among
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people
. Unfortunately,
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many
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people
lack this
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skill
and
therefore
there is an
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argument
that it should
be taught
at
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schools
. I
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agree
with this view. In this essay, I shall
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explain
why
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good
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public
speaking
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skills
are
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important
in life.

Predominantly
, the major
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argument
in
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favour
of
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public
speaking is that it develops one’s personality. When a person
successfully
delivers a
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good
speech, it enhances his sense of self-worthiness. A
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positive
response from the audience can
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help
him to develop confidence. More than that, it
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improves
relationships. A marked improvement can be
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seen
in his interpersonal
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skills
which, in turn, will
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help
him maintain healthy relationships with friends, family and his colleagues at work.
In addition
, it acts as a
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stress
buster for an individual and will
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help
him overcome his stage fear or shyness.
Therefore
, it is
clearly
evident that
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public
presentation
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is beneficial for our society.

Notably
,
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good
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public
speaking
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skills
are essential for success in personal and professional life. I
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agree
with the
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argument
that they should
be taught
in
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schools
. The standard
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school
curriculum
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now
focuses more on reading and writing.
Consequently
, speaking does not
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get
the importance it deserves. This should
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change
.
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Schools
can organize various
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programmes
that give students an opportunity to express their
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ideas
in front of an audience.
For example
, there could be elocution and story telling competitions.
Thus
, it is comprehensible to consider that they should
be made
a part of the curriculum.

Putting in the nutshell, the art of
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public
speaking is
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very
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important
in
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today
’s scenario. If children acquire this
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skill
, they will stand a much better chance in the
highly
competitive job market.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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