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Manufacturing process of noodles

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The process indicates how the instant noodles are manufactured in the factories and supplied to us. This are also known as ready to eat noodles and are in demand since 20th century. The process is very classy and affermativ which consist of only several steps. Firstly, the Flour which is completely and finely grind is stored in storage area. The second process is of mixing the Flour with oil and water to make hard Dough with the help of rollers which spread the Dough into wide Dough sheets. Next the sheets are stripped in machines gradually and are certainly kept in shape of Noodle discs. The next mechanism is of drying and cooking in oil and are frequently kept in Cups in which some spices and fresh vegetables are added at steady rate in meanwhile time. The brand is most important thing which should be added to improve trust and for corresponding selling. Now the Cups goes toward the process of labelling process and are sealed in vaccume create pressure which keep food fresh for several days. Overall the processed contain huge investment but the profit is gained in very large amount.
The
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process
indicates how the instant noodles
are manufactured
in the factories and supplied to us.
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This are
also
known as ready to eat noodles and are in demand since 20th century. The
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process
is
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very
classy and
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affermativ
which consist of
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only
several steps.

Firstly
, the Flour which is completely and
finely
grind
is stored
in storage area. The second
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process
is of mixing the Flour with oil and water to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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hard
Dough with the
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help
of rollers which spread the Dough into wide Dough sheets.

Next
the sheets
are stripped
in machines
gradually
and are
certainly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
in shape of Noodle discs. The
next
mechanism is of drying and cooking in oil and are
frequently
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kept
in Cups in which
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some
spices and fresh vegetables are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
at steady rate in meanwhile time. The brand is
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most
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important
thing which should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to
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improve
trust and for corresponding selling.
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Now
the Cups goes toward the
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process
of labelling
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process
and
are sealed
in
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vaccume
create pressure which
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keep
food fresh for several days.

Overall
the processed contain huge investment
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but
the profit
is gained
in
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very
large amount.
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IELTS essay Manufacturing process of noodles

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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