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Ha Long Bay is a famous place located in Quang Ninh Province Viet Nam, which was recognised by UNESCO in 1994. The tour of Ha Long Bay attracted visitors who come to love breathtaking views and other activities. Ha Long Bay is well-known for its beautiful scenery, including thousand of caves and rocks. Moreover, Ha Long Bay cuisine is also abundant, especially fresh seafood such as crabs, lobster and sea squid. Tourists not only have the opportunity to discover diverse activities but also see a variety of mysterious places at a reasonable price. Ha Long Bay may affect people’s minds about local food or the breathtaking view of mountains, which will be become unforgettable memories about the Ha Long Bay tour. Ge
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IELTS essay geographical area in your country

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