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Describe your feeling now?

Describe your feeling now? A3Kn1
Like an electric current flowing from the heart to every part of the body. Although small, it smoldered, hour after hour, causing me to slowly die. And I dont know how to get this feeling out of myself. I wonder how i wonder why, i wonder where they are, its describe me, i can not move it out again anymore. When the islanders cleared the forests for firewood and farming, the forests didn’t grow back. As trees became scarce and they could no longer construct wooden canoes for fishing, they ate birds. Soil erosion decreased their crop yields. Before Europeans arrived, the Rapanui had descended into civil war and cannibalism, he maintains.
Like an electric
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current
flowing from the heart to every part of the body. Although
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small
, it smoldered, hour after hour, causing me to
slowly
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die
. And I
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dont
know how to
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get
this feeling out of myself. I wonder how
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
wonder why,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
wonder where they are, its
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describe
me,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can not
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move
it out again anymore. When the islanders cleared the forests for firewood and farming, the forests didn’t grow back. As trees became
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
scarce and
they could no longer construct wooden canoes for fishing, they ate birds. Soil erosion decreased their crop yields.
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Before
Europeans arrived, the
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Rapanui
had descended into civil war and cannibalism, he maintains.
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IELTS essay Describe your feeling now?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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