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makeup in our life is most important

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I first got interested in makeup one day when I was in quarantine. My mum in this period finished course for makeup, and I also want that she teach me. I found I really enjoyed making my face look more attractive which were more complicated. Not all of my makeup was successful, but I try to do something which will be wonderful. Now I can quick make makeup and it is not difficult for me. Every day I use foundation, stick for lips, concealer, eyebrows, mascara, bronzer and contours and when I need to go at holiday or go out I use all which use every day furthermore eyeliners and highlighters. I think that makeup in the life of every girl plays an important role. When girls can be more attractive

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got
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makeup
 one day when I was in quarantine. My mum in this period finished course for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpaintlipstick
makeup
, and I also
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want that she
 teach me.

I found I really
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makeup
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but
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quick
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make
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makeup
 and it is not difficult for me. Every day I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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use
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use
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think
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makeup
 in the life of every girl plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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