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Everything has beauty,but not everyone sees it

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In this world all people are interested in something, but not all interested in the same. It is important to understand that everything has beauty, and they look amazing in their own unique ways. However, at the same time, it is the perception that tends to vary from one person to another. Every person sees beauty in different things, one person like painting, another love dancing, singing. Firstly, I think so because I look at me and at my friend, we are into very good friendship but she loves reading and I love watching videos, movies because for her books is more important, but for me movies and all types of videos. I would to say that she sees beauty into to read, but I into to watch, we are different. Secondly, I would to say that see beauty is connected with our skills and also with the surrounding with which we are friends or we have good relation have a impact in distinguishing beauty. In conclusion, I believe that every person is unique and every sees beauty in his way.
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IELTS essay Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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