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How technologies changed our lives

How technologies changed our lives m5AeL
How technology changed our lives Ancient and modern human civilizations have benefited from and hindered technological innovations, inventions, and engineering applications used to perform specific tasks in societies. Technological innovations became necessary for the prosperity and development of societies, but the cultures, ideals, and aspirations of human societies shaped how these civilizations created, benefited from, and hindered technology. Because technological systems have been invented by humans and reflect the needs and cultures of the population, human societies / civilizations and their technology have become inseparable. The cyclical nature of society and technology is such that each factor has a major impact on each other, starting with human societies, and this leads to the development of different technologies to meet the needs of society. These technologies change the way communities behave and operate - it also affects and develops their economies, which increases the need for more technology, resulting in a cycle. These interrelated relations of interaction and co-production have existed since the beginning of history, and as a result the two main forms of these synergistic relations have developed together depending on the type of society under consideration.
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Ancient and modern
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used
to perform specific tasks in
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societies
. Technological innovations became necessary for the prosperity and development of
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societies
,
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human
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societies
shaped how these civilizations created, benefited from, and hindered
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technology
.
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humans
and reflect the needs and cultures of the population,
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human
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societies
/ civilizations and their
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technology
have become inseparable. The cyclical nature of
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society
and
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technology
is such that each factor has a major impact on each other, starting with
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human
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societies
, and this leads to the development of
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different
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technologies
to
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meet
the needs of
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society
. These
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technologies
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change
the way communities behave and operate
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it
also
affects and develops their economies, which increases the need for more
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technology
, resulting in a cycle. These interrelated relations of interaction and co-production have existed since the beginning of history, and
as a result
the two main forms of these synergistic relations have developed together depending on the type of
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society
under consideration.
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IELTS essay How technologies changed our lives

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
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