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Make an essay about your ideal office

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My ideal office will be a place to let my mind wonder and stimulate creativity. It will also to create a good and positive energy for me to produce my best work. It will be modern, clean and tidy. There will be an office desk and a chair next to the window. On the desk, there will be a computer and keyboard that I work on everyday. I will also put a tiny pot of bonsai on the desk, it will help me focus on work easily. Behind them will be a filing cabinet so I can find or hold documents and folders conveniently. On the wall, there will be a clock and next to it will be a number of pictures. In summer, the weather is quite hot consequently I will install an air conditioner. In addition, I need some of gadgets such as: highlighters, pens, paper clips, . . . Oh I've just remembered, I will put an small recycle bin next to the filing cabinet for garbage. It is my ideal office, I look forward to it in near future.
My ideal office will be a place to
let
my mind wonder and stimulate creativity. It will
also
to create a
good
and
positive
energy for me to produce my best work. It will be modern, clean and tidy. There will be an office desk and a chair
next
to the window. On the desk, there will be a computer and keyboard that I work on
everyday
. I will
also
put a tiny pot of bonsai on the desk, it will
help
me focus on work
easily
. Behind them will be a filing cabinet
so
I can find or hold documents and folders
conveniently
. On the wall, there will be a clock and
next
to it will be a number of pictures. In summer, the weather is quite hot
consequently
I will install an air conditioner.
In addition
, I need
some of gadgets
such as: highlighters, pens, paper clips
, .
.
.
Oh
I've
just
remembered, I will put
an
small
recycle bin
next
to the filing cabinet for garbage. It is my ideal office, I look forward to it in near future.
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IELTS essay Make an essay about your ideal office

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  American English
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183 words
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