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Describe the process of making recycling of glass bottles.

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The rendered picture depicts the stages of recycling of glass bottles. It is clear that seven steps are involved in this process. At a fleeting glance, it can be clearly observed that in the first step, glass bottles are collected from public places such as parks, museum and after that through transportation it is send to the factory and the process of classification is done based on the metal cap and plastic cap. Broaching further, in the fourth step, the glass is brake down and broken glass is transported by car in the next step. Now, glass and raw material are mixed up and heated upto 1200 degree Celsius. The process is known as furnace. In the seventh and final step with the help of melted mixture new bottles are made in the glass factories. Overall, it is clearly seen that procees of making glass is long because it is involving many process.
The rendered picture depicts the stages of recycling of
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glass
bottles. It is
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clear
that seven
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steps
are involved
in this
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process
. At a fleeting glance, it can be
clearly
observed that in the
first
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step
,
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glass
bottles
are collected
from public places such as parks, museum and after that through transportation it is
Consider using a past participle here: "sent".
send
to the factory and the
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process
of classification
is done
based on the metal cap and plastic cap. Broaching
further
, in the fourth
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step
, the
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glass
is brake down and broken
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glass
is transported
by car in the
next
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step
.
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Now
,
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glass
and raw material
are mixed
up and heated
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upto
1200 degree Celsius. The
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process
is known
as furnace. In the seventh and final
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step
with the
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help
of melted mixture new bottles
are made
in the
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glass
factories.
Overall
, it is
clearly
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seen
that
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procees
of making
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glass
is long
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because
it
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is involving
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many
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process
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IELTS essay Describe the process of making recycling of glass bottles.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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