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Magnetic field Applications in the agriculture

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Magnetic field is an unpreventable environmental factor for all living organisms. Several investigations revealed that the positive effect of static magnetic field on the germination, root development, early growth in the plant seeds, the absorption of the water and carbondioxyde, the content of the photosynthetic pigments. In the agriculture sector due to this features of magnetic field applications, even in abiotic stress circumstances positive outcomes have begun to be obtained.

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IELTS essay Magnetic field Applications in the agriculture

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American English

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70 words

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