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machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. v. 1
It is often argued that language translation by artificial machines is less precise and slow in speed. Some people say that the machines are not likely to take the part of humans. Even though people are the inventor of these things, I disagree with this assertion that there is no immediate threat to human's employment in this role. First of all, seeing the advancement in technology, it can be predicted that some computer-based systems will replace the role of a translator. In other words, scientists are busy in building complex algorithms so that the machines take over every work of humans. For example, the robot Sophia is even able to have a conversation with another person as an individual, so we can assume that the human translation job will also be taken by this kind of android. Consequently, machines can work as translating personnel. Secondly, people pursuing their careers in different fields of engineering and medical sectors are significantly rising. Due to this, there may be a shortage of employers doing the job as a transcriber. For instance, paying in sectors like science and technology is quite high, thereby no person is satisfied with this kind of occupation. Furthermore, parents are compelling their children to have a career in a science related job. Consequently, there might be the scarcity of manpower to do a simple job like this. In conclusion, although humans seem to be more accurate and reliable for the job as a translator, there is no denying the fact that machines will replace them seeing the advancement of technology. So, in my opinion, I disagree that machines are not predictable to replace this work of humans.
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argued that language translation by artificial
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is less precise and slow in speed.
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Some
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people
say that the
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machines
are not likely to take the part of
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humans
.
Even though
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people
are the inventor of these things, I disagree with this assertion that there is no immediate threat to human's employment in this role.

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First of all
, seeing the advancement in technology, it can
be predicted
that
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some
computer-based systems will replace the role of a translator.
In other words
, scientists are busy in building complex algorithms
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
take over every work of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
.
For example
, the robot Sophia is even able to have a conversation with another person as an individual,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we can assume that the
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human
translation
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job
will
also
be taken
by this kind of android.
Consequently
,
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machines
can work as translating personnel.

Secondly
,
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people
pursuing their careers in
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different
fields of engineering and medical sectors are
significantly
rising. Due to this, there may be a shortage of employers doing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
as a transcriber.
For instance
, paying in sectors like science and technology is quite high, thereby no person
is satisfied
with this kind of occupation.
Furthermore
, parents are compelling their children to have a career in a science related
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job
.
Consequently
, there might be the scarcity of manpower to do a simple
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job
like this.

In conclusion
, although
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humans
seem to be more accurate and reliable for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
as a translator, there is no denying the fact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
will replace them seeing the advancement of technology.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, in my opinion, I disagree that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
are not predictable to replace this work of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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