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Love story and how to make it easier for me

Love story and how to make it easier for me G9bpe
I have attached my resume for your kind reference and perusal and consideration in the position as I am very keen to work in the industry to be a valuable asset to your company as I am working on the field I am working in with my client and I am looking forward to work in the team at the moment I have been working. I have worked in the industry 30 for I have attached my resume for your kind reference and perusal and consideration in the position as I am very keen to work in the industry to be a valuable asset to your company as I am working on the field I am working in with my client and I am looking forward to work in the team at the moment I have been working. I have worked in the industry 30 for
I have attached my resume for your kind reference and perusal and consideration in the position as I am
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in the
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to be a valuable asset to your
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as I am
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on the field I am
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client and
I am looking forward to
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work
in the team at the moment I have been
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. I have worked in the
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industry
30 for I have attached my resume for your kind reference and perusal and consideration in the position as I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
keen to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
industry
to be a valuable asset to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
on the field I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
in with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
client and
I am looking forward to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in the team at the moment I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have worked in the
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industry
30
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IELTS essay Love story and how to make it easier for me

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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