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Lots of people are throwing away food. What are the reasons for this and how can food wastage be reduced? v.2

Lots of people are throwing away food. What are the reasons for this and how can food wastage be reduced? v. 2
Over the years, with the development of new technologies, many people are not concerned about the wastage of food. Despite knowing that wasting the food is consuming the resources more, people tend to throw the food without even considering the future impacts. In this essay, the reasons for throwing the food and solutions for this are explained in the following paragraphs. To commence with, primarily, the reason behind the wastage of food is purchased or preparing food too much. In other words, it's obvious that the excess food on the plate will go waste. Furthermore, nobody wants to have excess than the need of their body. For example, during the parties or such events, people prepare the food more than needed and eventually the prepared food will be thrown in the garbage. Consequently, prepared food will go waste. However, considering the problem, there is a solution for it. First of all, the organizers of any events or parties should perfectly estimate the number of people coming to eat. Similarly, people should not buy food haphazardly, in fact, they should be concerned about the number of people eating it. In this way, the wastage of food can be reduced. In conclusion, food wastage is one of the huge problems of the modern generation. However, this can be somewhat reduced by analysing the number of people consuming it systematically.
Over the years, with the development of new technologies,
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many
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people
are not concerned about the
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wastage
of
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food
. Despite knowing that wasting the
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food
is consuming the resources more,
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people
tend to throw the
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food
without even considering the future impacts. In this essay, the reasons for throwing the
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food
and solutions for this are
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explained
in the following paragraphs.

To commence with,
primarily
, the reason behind the
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wastage
of
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food
is
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purchased
or preparing
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food
too much.
In other words
, it's obvious that the excess
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food
on the plate will go waste.
Furthermore
, nobody wants to have
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excess
than the need of their body.
For example
, during the parties or such
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events
,
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people
prepare the
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food
more than needed and
eventually
the prepared
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food
will
be thrown
in the garbage.
Consequently
, prepared
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food
will go waste.

However
, considering the problem, there is a solution for it.
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First of all
, the organizers of any
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events
or parties should
perfectly
estimate the number of
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people
coming to eat.
Similarly
,
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people
should not
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buy
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food
haphazardly
, in fact, they should
be concerned
about the number of
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people
eating it. In this way, the
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wastage
of
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food
can be
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reduced
.

In conclusion
,
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food
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wastage
is one of the huge problems of the modern generation.
However
, this can be somewhat
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reduced
by
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analysing
the number of
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people
consuming it
systematically
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Lots of people are throwing away food. What are the reasons for this and how can food wastage be reduced? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
227 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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