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Losing somthing that is precious to me

Losing somthing that is precious to me 2R7j6
Have you ever lost something which is valuable to you? Or are you afraid to lose it? I'm going to talk about something I extremely adore, but I lost it. Personally, I think that priceless stuff is not related to the cost. For instance, it could be anything that others consider silly. In fact, the owner believes that the most important thing to them. Also, it could be a gift from people you love. Once, I lost something I really loved because it was from my friend of life; it had been stolen from me. I was walking in the park and out of the blue a thief took it unexpectedly from my hand. However, it seems to me if there is something that has an expansive cost, it isn't necessary to be essential to me
Have you ever lost
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something
which is valuable to you? Or are you afraid to lose it? I'm going to talk about
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something
I
extremely
adore,
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but
I lost it.

Personally
, I
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think
that priceless stuff is not related to the cost.
For instance
, it could be anything that others consider silly. In fact, the owner believes that the most
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important
thing to them.
Also
, it could be a gift from
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people
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
. Once, I lost
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something
I
really
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loved
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because
it was from my friend of life; it had
been stolen
from me. I was walking in the park and out of the blue a thief took it
unexpectedly
from my hand.
However
, it seems to me if there is
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something
that has an expansive cost, it isn't necessary to be essential to me
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IELTS essay Losing somthing that is precious to me

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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