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Examples of some ways in which humans are reasonable for damaging the environment. What can government do for protecting the environment? What can individuals do?

Examples of some ways in which humans are reasonable for damaging the environment. What can government do for protecting the environment? What can individuals do? lLJBW
While it is true to say that environment plays an inevitable role in our biodiversity, still humans are responsible for damaging the environment owing to a plethora of reasons. This essay will examine some major causes of damaging the environment and how can individuals and the government cope up with this problem. The Two main causes of this problem are air Pollution and waste. Gas emissions from the factories and mills has a massive impact on the environment, having a large amount of carbon dioxide which can affect our planet and causes global warming. Moreover, a large number of vehicle effuse fuems in the street that has detrimental effect in our planet as well. On the other hand, throwing a lot of waste in the river and ocean, we can polute the waterways. For illustration, there was an area in Costa Rica which was leading a contemporary era, but people tended to cut trees for vegetation, even they were throwing waste into the rivers, as a consequence this era is abandoned right now. Some specific solutions of this Problem are government should implement some laws and impose some rules regarding green taxes. As a result, people might be used public transport rather than personal car. Then, gas emissions and fuems problem will be solved soon; In addition, public awarness should be imposed as soon as possible. Actually they should follow the rules of government and forbid to throw waste in the river or ocean. By protecting the environment, we can save our planet from thr global warming. To conclude, Environment is polluting day by day owing to vast ammount of reasons, still government and individual should come forward to cope up with problem and so it may save our environment as well as our creatures.
While it is true to say that
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environment
plays an inevitable role in our biodiversity,
still
humans are responsible for damaging the
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environment
owing to a plethora of reasons. This essay will examine
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some
major causes of damaging the
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environment
and how can individuals and the
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government
cope up with this problem.

The Two main causes of this
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problem
are air Pollution and
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waste
. Gas emissions from the factories and mills has a massive impact on the
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environment
, having a large amount of carbon dioxide which can affect our planet and causes global warming.
Moreover
,
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a large number of
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fuems
in the street that has detrimental effect in our planet
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.
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, throwing
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a lot of
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waste
in the river and ocean, we can
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polute
the waterways. For illustration, there was an area in Costa Rica which was leading a contemporary era,
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but
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people
tended to
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cut
trees for vegetation, even they were throwing
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waste
into the rivers, as a consequence this era
is abandoned
right
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now
.
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Some
specific solutions of this
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are
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government
should implement
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some
laws and impose
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some
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rules
regarding green taxes.
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,
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people
might be
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used
public transport
rather
than personal car. Then, gas emissions and
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fuems
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problem
will
be solved
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soon
;
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, public
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awarness
should
be imposed
as
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soon
as possible. Actually they should follow the
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rules
of
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government
and forbid to throw
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waste
in the river or ocean. By protecting the
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environment
, we can save our planet from
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thr
global warming.

To conclude
,
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Environment
is polluting day by day owing to vast
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ammount
of reasons,
still
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government
and individual should
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come
forward to cope up with
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problem
and
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so
it may save our
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environment
as well
as our creatures.
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IELTS essay Examples of some ways in which humans are reasonable for damaging the environment. What can government do for protecting the environment? What can individuals do?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
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