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Knowledge is the main key for success in today's modern technological world; The more enhance way form of environmental science can reflex with better prediction. In my opinion, there are several benefits of studing environmental science. Reasons regarding my opinion are discussed below. In the beginning, the environmental science can help to forecast or predict natural calamities. In many regions of earth the tectonic plates movements can also be monitored by the understanding regarding environment. Moreover, by future possibilities prediction one can be prepared for the situations which are going to come. People can be more aware in terms of natural changes in ecosystem. For instance, oil availability in Arab countries had a prediction that there will be no more oil drains from 2025; so the government come up with other option to generate revenue. Furthermore, by the environmental science more and more information regarding the land can be found. The changes in environment due to the pollution created by humans. However, the side effects of different types of pollution is adverse to the nature. This kind of human behaviour disturbs natural occurance of certain activites. People can relate their behaviour towards negative effects to nature by their way of living. By the science study of environment people can understand importance of the nature. For example, in world their is a place in Africa where people are totally educated about their relation with nature and to help environment grow better they put their efforts. I conclude that, by various studies on the topic of environmental science a person can finds the real value of the gift giving by God to humans. Improvement in their living techniques can be observed because people are aware of side effects of their behaviour towards nature.
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environmental
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environmental
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can
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help
to forecast or predict natural calamities. In
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many
regions of earth the tectonic plates movements can
also
be monitored
by the understanding regarding
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environment
.
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, by future
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prediction one can
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for the situations which are going to
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come
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People
can be more aware in terms of natural
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changes
in ecosystem.
For instance
, oil availability in Arab countries had a prediction that there will be no more oil drains from 2025;
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so
the
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government
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up with other option to generate revenue.

Furthermore
, by the
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science
more and more information regarding the land can
be found
. The
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changes
in
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environment
due to the pollution created by humans.
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, the side effects of
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different
types of pollution is adverse to the
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nature
. This kind of human
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disturbs natural
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occurance
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can relate their
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by their way of living. By the
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study of
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environment
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people
can understand importance of the
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nature
.
For example
, in world
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is a place in Africa where
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people
are
totally
educated about their relation with
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nature
and to
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help
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environment
grow better they put their efforts. I conclude that, by various studies on the topic of
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environmental
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science
a person can
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the real value of the gift giving by God to humans. Improvement in their living techniques can
be observed
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because
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people
are aware of side effects of their
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behaviour
towards
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nature
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IELTS essay Environmental science benefits

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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