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look at the two pictures showing julia grant a volunteer on a science project. Using the pictures, write a description of Julia's daily rotine. In your description, you should: begin

look at the two pictures showing julia grant a volunteer on a science project. Using the pictures, write a description of Julia's daily rotine. In your description, you should: begin nx89P
Julia Grant is 21 years old and works as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. Every morning, she gets up at 6: 00am. She starts work at 8: 00 in the morning, so she turns on her laptop while she drinks a coffee. Then, in the noon, she helps her sister to prepare the lunch and she always washes up the dishes. After that, she sometimes does the laundry. Next, she goes to the beach and reads book at 2: 00pm. She often relaxes with her friends at the evening. Then, they try to eat something, so they make fire and talk to each other. The next morning, she drinks coffee at a beachfront café. After that, she usually dives to see the beauty under the sea.
Julia Grant is 21 years
old
and works as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. Every morning, she
gets
up at 6: 00am. She
starts
work at 8: 00 in the morning,
so
she turns on her laptop while she drinks a coffee. Then, in the noon, she
helps
her sister to prepare the
lunch and
she always washes up the dishes. After that, she
sometimes
does the laundry.
Next
, she goes to the beach and reads book at 2: 00pm. She
often
relaxes with her friends
at the evening
. Then, they try to eat something,
so
they
make
fire and talk to each other. The
next
morning, she drinks coffee at a beachfront café. After that, she
usually
dives to
see
the beauty under the sea.
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IELTS essay look at the two pictures showing julia grant a volunteer on a science project. Using the pictures, write a description of Julia's daily rotine. In your description, you should: begin

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