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What was the trigger for having an interest in Japan?

What was the trigger for having an interest in Japan? mWWOA
I have always been interested in Japan since I was younger. Somehow, the cozy atmosphere of the neighborhoods and the general style that I used to see on tv fascinated me. As I grew older, my passion for japan became stronger, I started to learn more about Japanese culture and history, furthermore, I used the opportunity of studying design to make my love for this country more concrete, and share it with everyone. I started using the Japanese style in all my projects and that is what made them more special to me. So, in a nutshell, Japan has been my inspirational guardian spirit to all of my achievements in my university
I have always
been interested
in Japan since I was younger. Somehow, the cozy atmosphere of the neighborhoods and the general style that I
used
to
see
on
tv
fascinated me. As I grew older, my passion for japan became stronger, I
started
to learn more about Japanese culture and history,
furthermore
, I
used
the opportunity of studying design to
make
my
love
for this country more concrete, and share it with everyone. I
started
using the Japanese style in all my projects and
that is
what made them more special to me.
So
, in a nutshell, Japan has been my inspirational guardian spirit to all of my achievements in my university
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IELTS essay What was the trigger for having an interest in Japan?

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  American English
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