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do you think that certain sports players and sports are underrated in India/

do you think that certain sports players and sports are underrated in India/ o6KRV
There are distinctive types of sports that are played across the globe. Sports help to inculcate various values in the players. However, certain types of sports and sports players are underrated in India. Sports act as a bridge between two countries. It teaches the values of punctuality, competitiveness, teamwork, and brotherhood. Indian players have bought glories to their nation by winning world championships. They are known for some common sports such as' cricket, ' 'badminton, ' 'boxing, ' and 'weightlifting. ' Many sports are not supported and the existence of various sports and sports players is unknown. For example, 'Javeline, ' 'horse riding, ' 'discus throw, ' are some of the sports which do not get attention. Moreover, after the victory of 'Neeraj Chopra' in the Olympics 2020, people were enthralled to know about Javeline. Indian players must have been paying much attention to cricket, whereas, the national sport, that is, hockey is rendered unattended. On the other hand, fun sports like 'longboarding, ' 'ice skating, ' and 'gymnastics, ' are never endorsed. Many luminary players like 'Virat Kohli' are sometimes unable to score even a single unit. The main reason for this issue is the lack of awareness amongst people. Further, the governmental authorities responsible for promoting and helping the sportsperson are careless. They do not invest money in the ramification of conducive sports clubs and gyms for the players. They never encourage people to indulge in sports which are rare in India. In summary, certain sports are underrated in India, which hamper its growth in the field of sports.
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across the globe.
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help
to inculcate various values in the
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players
.
However
, certain types of
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sports
and
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sports
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players
are underrated
in India.

Sports act as a bridge between two countries. It teaches the values of punctuality, competitiveness, teamwork, and brotherhood. Indian
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players
have
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bought
glories to their nation by winning world championships. They
are known
for
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some
common
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sports
such as' cricket,
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'badminton,
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'boxing,
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and 'weightlifting. '
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sports
are not supported and the existence of various
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and
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players
is unknown.
For example
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Javeline
,
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'horse riding,
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'discus throw,
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are
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some of the
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which do not
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get
attention.
Moreover
, after the victory of '
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Neeraj
Chopra' in the Olympics 2020,
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people
were enthralled
to know about
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Javeline
.

Indian
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players
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must
have been paying much attention to cricket, whereas, the national
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sport
,
that is
, hockey
is rendered
unattended.
On the other hand
, fun
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sports
like '
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longboarding
,
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'ice skating,
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and 'gymnastics,
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are never endorsed.
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luminary
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Kohli
' are
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sometimes
unable to score even a single unit. The main reason for this issue is the lack of awareness amongst
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people
.
Further
, the governmental authorities responsible for promoting and helping the sportsperson are careless. They do not invest money in the ramification of conducive
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sports
clubs and gyms for the
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players
. They never encourage
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people
to indulge in
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sports
which are rare in India.

In summary, certain
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are underrated
in India, which hamper its growth in the field of
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sports
.
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IELTS essay do you think that certain sports players and sports are underrated in India/

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