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the best nations in the world

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We will talking about nations and how there are, and how are the best nations In the past there were a lot of nation that doing some bad job, but in this period the best nations are the worst nations in the life, all the people are racist for there leather color or for there wealth. But that not says that there are only bad nations in the best nations, there are a little bit of them were good. There are nations that they don't have any think to eat but the people in the nation are really the best people in the world
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, there are a
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IELTS essay the best nations in the world

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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