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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Living in cities is better than in the countryside.

Living in cities is better than in the countryside. OgrJM
Although city life has exclusive benefits, some people would prefer to choose the countryside as a place of their lives. The question here is whether living in urban areas brings dwellers more advantages rather than living in rural areas or not. There are various unique advantages to city life that can not be found in any villages. In the towns, there are many job opportunities due to the accumulation of small businesses and big/well-reputed companies. Also, cities are developed places that provide their residents with plenty of urban amenities, including higher education, public transport, numerous entertainment centers-- sports stadiums, amusement parks, cinemas--, and lots of shopping opportunities. So towns are good destinations for those who tend to live a modern life and are eager to experience different aspects of urban life. On the other hand, living in rural areas has specific features that might absorb some people. For example, fresh and clean air is one of the main characteristics of the countryside, which is an attractive item for those who are escaping from the polluted air of the urban areas. In addition, in contrast to the cities, there is neither overpopulation nor traffic congestion in the villages, and most people have jobs that need to be physically active. As a result of these merits, the rural folks are likely to be healthier than the city populations and have a bigger chance to live a calm life. In conclusion, I think both cities and the countryside have their particular benefits and whether it is better to live in the urban or rural areas depends on individual preferences, tastes, and needs. @IELTS_phoenix
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some
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people
would prefer to choose the countryside as a place of their
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lives
. The question here is whether living in
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urban
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areas
brings dwellers more advantages
rather
than living in
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rural
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areas
or not.

There are various unique advantages to city life that can not
be found
in any villages. In the towns, there are
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many
job opportunities due to the accumulation of
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small
businesses and
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big
/well-reputed
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companies
.
Also
,
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cities
are developed
places that provide their residents with
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plenty
of
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urban
amenities, including higher education, public transport, numerous entertainment centers-- sports stadiums, amusement parks, cinemas--, and lots of shopping opportunities.
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So
towns are
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good
destinations for those who tend to
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live
a modern life and are eager to experience
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different
aspects of
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urban
life.

On the other hand
, living in
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rural
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areas
has specific features that might absorb
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some
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people
.
For example
, fresh and clean air is one of the main characteristics of the countryside, which is an attractive item for those who are escaping from the polluted air of the
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urban
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areas
.
In addition
,
in contrast
to the
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cities
, there is neither overpopulation nor traffic congestion in the villages, and most
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people
have jobs that need to be
physically
active.
As a result
of these merits, the
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rural
folks are likely to be healthier than the city populations and have a bigger chance to
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live
a calm life.

In conclusion
, I
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think
both
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cities
and the countryside have their particular benefits and whether it is better to
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live
in the
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urban
or
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rural
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areas
depends on individual preferences, tastes, and needs.

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IELTS essay Living in cities is better than in the countryside.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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