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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language

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Nowadays, plenty numbers of citizens migrate from one countries to another nations it is gradually increase trend in present days. People have different views regarding to speak foreign language. Some people believe that talk non native language can cause hazard social problems. In this easy I disagree with this statement. To begin with, there are many considerable pros to speak foreign language. Firstly, living is 21 century we can learn non native language through social media, television, drama, news and memories the pharce and different sentence. It enhance to our vocabularies range. Also, if we live in foreign countries people force to speak foreign language instance of their mother tongue so, its helps to improve language. For example, English is most commonly used and important language for education, communication because todays plethora of intelligence students as well as ordinary workers live their place of residence hoping to become more successful and spend prosperous life. Furthermore, we have to speak other language then we have to chance to know about foreign culture, tradition and costume. While, if we have language barriers we can face so many problems so that we can not found found job easily because we can not understand language properly. Moreover, if they speak their own language there would be no people communicate until they speak fluently. In a nutshell, speak foreign language have so many benefits individual person. Nevertheless it doesn't come without drawbacka.
Nowadays,
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numbers of citizens migrate from
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one countries
to another nations it is
gradually
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increase
trend in present days.
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People
have
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different
views
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regarding to
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speak
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foreign
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language
.
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Some
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people
believe that talk
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non native
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language
can cause hazard social problems. In this easy I disagree with this statement.

To
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begin
with, there are
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many
considerable pros to
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speak
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foreign
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language
.
Firstly
, living is
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21 century
we can learn
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non native
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language
through social media, television, drama, news and memories the
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pharce
and
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different
sentence. It
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to our vocabularies range.
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, if we
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live
in
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foreign
countries
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people
force to
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speak
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foreign
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language
instance of their mother tongue
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, its
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helps
to
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language
.
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, English is most
commonly
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and
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language
for education, communication
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because
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todays
plethora of intelligence students
as well
as ordinary workers
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live
their place of residence hoping to become more successful and spend prosperous life.

Furthermore
, we
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have to
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speak
other
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language
then we
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have to
chance to know about
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foreign
culture, tradition and costume. While, if we have
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barriers we can face
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so
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problems
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so
that we can not
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found found
job
easily
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because
we can not understand
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language
properly
.
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, if they
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speak
their
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own
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language
there would be no
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people
communicate until they
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speak
fluently
.

In a nutshell,
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speak
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foreign
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language
have
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so
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many
benefits individual person.
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without
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
237 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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