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According to the research one of the most significant subjects which the world has faced it is reduction of social relationships. In order to development of technology and its fast advancement particularly on internet, people specially adults tended to have virtual relationships. Although during 2 years ago for appearance of Corona virus, people have had to use virtual relations more than the past because of a number of limitations. Therefore this issue helped to expand of this global predicament. On the other hand, one of the best situation to make friends and additionally some connects has been shopping centres. Nevertheless, in ground of change the means of purchase, thanks to technology, another way of relevancy is disappointing. In my view, declining of social relationships could be an important factor of loneliness in the future. Inconclusion, governors should have a durable plan to address this problem

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helped
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Inconclusion
, governors should have a durable plan to address this problem