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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, a number of nation are living in the foreign countries also they have to speak their second or third language. Thus, multiple society will struggle with languages obstacle. For example, individuals may face on vital communicate issues also it is extremely hard for society to cope with practical problems. I strongly agree with this point of view and in this essay I will explain why with a number of examples. It is true that new visitors will confront with a variety of problems in their life as they merely been a foreign country also it happened on me as an international student. Yet, new visitors only occupy the minor and therefore it doesn't mean that all foreign society need to tackle with language problems. What I mean is that a large number of people move to a new country due to the fact they are familiar with that country also they have adequate ability on both language and economy to support their life. Consequently, although most of individuals who are not native speakers, they still can deal with any problems in their life also they absolutely have excellent language level to assist them to move to the foreign countries. However, no one can deny that multiple society are confused by the language issues which lead to communicate obstacles and live problems. Meanwhile, these problems arise in new visitors or new migraters life for long time. Firstly, it is widely recognized that a plethora of international learners are prevented by the language to apply for universities, which means that they have minimum words to use on social connections and access foreign language in an appropriate approach. As a result, they are struggling with vocabularies and structure of sentences in language leading to them hard to express what they want to buy on supporting their live. Secondly, horrible language skill will cause individuals to build their own social net work. For instance, native speakers would not love to communicate with a person who can not contribute to their opinion. Consequently, a number of society will ignore that person also he probably unable to participate in entertainment activities for making friends. In conclusion, although a number of people have strongly ability on language, most of nation are confused by languages to built their own social net work and access great language skill to cope with practical issues.
Nowadays, a
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number
of nation are living in the
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foreign
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countries
also
they
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have to
speak their second or third
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language
.
Thus
, multiple
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society
will struggle with
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languages
obstacle.
For example
, individuals may face on vital communicate issues
also
it is
extremely
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hard
for
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society
to cope with practical
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problems
. I
strongly
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agree
with this point of view and in this essay I will
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explain
why with a
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number
of examples.

It is true that
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new
visitors will confront with a variety of
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problems
in their
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life
as they
merely
been a
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foreign
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country
also
it happened on me as an international student.
Yet
,
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new
visitors
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only
occupy the minor and
therefore
it doesn't mean that all
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foreign
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society
need to tackle with
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language
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problems
. What I mean is that a large
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number
of
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people
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move
to a
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new
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country
due to the fact they are familiar with that
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country
also
they have adequate ability on both
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language
and economy to support their
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life
.
Consequently
, although
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most of individuals
who are not native speakers, they
still
can deal with any
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problems
in their
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life
also
they
absolutely
have excellent
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language
level to assist them to
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move
to the
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foreign
countries.

However
, no one can deny that multiple
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society
are confused
by the
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language
issues which lead to communicate obstacles and
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live
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problems
. Meanwhile, these
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problems
arise in
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new
visitors or
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new
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migraters
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life
for long time.
Firstly
, it is
widely
recognized that a plethora of international learners are
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prevented
by the
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language
to apply for universities, which means that they have minimum words to
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use
on social connections and access
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foreign
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language
in an appropriate approach.
As a result
, they are struggling with vocabularies and structure of sentences in
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language
leading to them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to express what they want to
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buy
on supporting their
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live
.
Secondly
, horrible
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language
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skill
will cause individuals to build their
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own
social net work.
For instance
, native speakers would not
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love
to communicate with a person who can not contribute to their opinion.
Consequently
, a
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number
of
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society
will
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ignore
that person
also
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he
probably
unable to participate in entertainment activities for making friends.

In conclusion
, although a
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number
of
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people
have
strongly
ability on
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language
,
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most of nation
are confused
by
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languages
to built their
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own
social net work and access great
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language
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skill
to cope with practical issues.
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IELTS essay living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
395 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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