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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To that extent do you agree or disagree. v.52

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To that extent v. 52
Serious social and practical issues can result due to staying in a foreign language speaking nation. I completely agree with this statement because of diverse culture and language difference. On the one hand, the first reason I believe that the cultural diversity aggravates the social and realistic threats. This is because different nations have different living standards, traditions, rituals and religions. Therefore, people who move to the foreign land where languages like English, Spanish, French can be spoken as it makes the communication difficulties. As a result, an individual might face discrimination, poverty and climate changes in abroad. For instance, in English speaking country, people can cook food in electrical utensils and eat meals by spoon, but in country like Nepal, they can use woods for cooking. Moreover, they always eat rice and vegetables by their own hand instead of the spoons. Furthermore, the vocabulary and words difference can create misunderstandings among people, especially when we are living away from the homelands. Following this, they are totally unaware of new environments and speeches in the initial period. Mostly, the scholars who move to the foreign countries in order to pursue higher education. Hence, they encounter there with accommodation problems and food scarcity. Likewise, they do not get pragmatic jobs because they are not able to communicate with the foreigners. In conclusion, living in a foreign language speaking nation lead to critical taxing of the people who move there from the other state. In my opinion, it is common for every person in the first year who reach overseas.
Serious social and practical issues can result due to staying in a
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speaking nation. I completely
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because
of diverse culture and
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language
difference.

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because
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different
nations have
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different
living standards, traditions, rituals and religions.
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,
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people
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who
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move
to the
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foreign
land where
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languages
like English, Spanish, French can
be spoken
as it
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makes
the communication difficulties.
As a result
, an individual might face discrimination, poverty and climate
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changes
in abroad.
For instance
, in
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English speaking
country,
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people
can cook food in electrical utensils and eat meals by spoon,
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but
in country like Nepal, they can
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use
woods for cooking.
Moreover
, they always eat rice and vegetables by their
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own
hand
instead
of the spoons.

Furthermore
, the vocabulary and words difference can create misunderstandings among
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people
,
especially
when we are living away from the homelands. Following this, they are
totally
unaware of new environments and speeches in the initial period.
Mostly
, the scholars
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who
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move
to the
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foreign
countries in order to pursue higher education.
Hence
, they encounter there with accommodation problems and food scarcity.
Likewise
, they do not
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get
pragmatic jobs
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because
they are not able to communicate with the foreigners.

In conclusion
, living in a
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foreign
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language
speaking nation lead to critical taxing of the
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people
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who
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move
there from the other state. In my opinion, it is common for every person in the
first
year
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who
reach overseas.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To that extent v. 52

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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