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Living in a big city is not good for me for some reasons.

Living in a big city is not good for me for some reasons. Nlx3m
Living in a big city is not good for me for some reasons. First, The cost of living in big cities is very high, two to three times higher than in rural areas. From food, clothes, entertainment, electricity, room rent, all are much more expensive and I really don't like that. Second, in the city the air is very polluted. The cause is smoke and dust from vehicles, indiscriminate burning of garbage. Third, what I really hate is traffic jams, Third, what I really hate is traffic jams. In big cities like Hanoi, traffic jams are common during rush hour. The main issue is the increase of transport such as car, truck, motorbike. Waiting in a traffic jam is terrible, there is both dust and loud horns, the feeling of traffic jams makes me very uncomfortable and tired and I think I'm not suitable for the city.
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jams are common during rush hour. The main issue is the increase of transport such as car, truck, motorbike. Waiting in a
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IELTS essay Living in a big city is not good for me for some reasons.

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  American English
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147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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