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Live in the city or in the countryside

Live in the city or in the countryside KWrE9
Peoples have different opinions while choosing their living place. Some people think that a village is a better place to live in, while others think a city is a preferred candidate to choose for their living. In my opinion, there are several reasons to believe that cities are the best places to live in because they provide facilities for a comfortable life. First of all, a city provides better education and career prospects. The renowned and excellent schools are built in the cities because most of the population live in cities. These schools employ the qualified teachers to provide education to the children. A child who gets the education in a city is considered the better one because of his broad range of experience and deep knowledge. The government and private businessman build universities and colleges in the city to improve the learning and skills in students. Various laboratories use the advanced appliances instruments that aid the students in higher education especially in research and this facility is mostly available in a city area. I have learned to operate IR spectrophotometers from Punjab University which is situated in Chandigarh City and cities are mostly the hub of education. Moreover, a city provides better prospects of life. The shops, malls are built in a city to attract customers from large area. The important home appliances like fan, refrigerator, car etc. are available in cities at a reasonable cost. Government offices are built in cities. Living in cities can help avoiding the dwellers to travel from village to city to do important official works. A city also provides sources of entertainment. Many festivals, carnivals are organised in the cities. Even peoples from the rural area come to a city to watch their favourite movies in Cinema Hall and Theatres. Sports stadium, training centres are located in cities. City life offers too many facilities that are absent in rural lives. The most important thing is that the city provides better medical services. Best hospitals, medical centres are built in big towns so that majority of people can have medical facilities. In these centres, expert doctors, specialist like neurosurgeons, heart surgeon works to treat peoples. These medical centres not only use advanced machines & instruments but also offer operation theatres for different types of operations for critical diseases. Cities are safe on health ground and have well-planned sanitation to avoid spreading epidemic. Cities have lifesaving medical centres. In summation, it is clear that city is the better place to live. The city not only provides good education and civil life but also provides best medical facilities.
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Peoples
have
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different
opinions while choosing their living
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place
.
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Some
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people
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think
that a village is a
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better
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place
to
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live
in, while others
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think
a city is a preferred candidate to choose for their living. In my opinion, there are several reasons to believe that
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cities
are the best
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places
to
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live
in
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because
they
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provide
facilities for a comfortable life.

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First of all
, a city
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provides
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better
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education
and career prospects. The renowned and excellent schools
are built
in the
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cities
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because
most of the population
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live
in
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cities
. These schools employ the qualified teachers to
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provide
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education
to the children. A child who
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gets
the
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education
in a city
is considered
the
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better
one
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because
of his broad range of experience and deep knowledge. The
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government
and private businessman build universities and colleges in the city to
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improve
the learning and
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skills
in students. Various laboratories
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use
the advanced appliances instruments that aid the students in higher
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education
especially
in research and this facility is
mostly
available in a city area. I have learned to operate IR spectrophotometers from Punjab University which
is situated
in Chandigarh City and
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cities
are
mostly
the hub of education.

Moreover
, a city
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provides
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better
prospects of life. The shops, malls
are built
in a city to attract customers from large area. The
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important
home appliances like fan, refrigerator, car etc. are available in
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cities
at a reasonable cost.
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Government
offices
are built
in
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cities
. Living in
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cities
can
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help
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avoiding
the dwellers to travel from village to city to do
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important
official works. A city
also
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provides
sources of entertainment.
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Many
festivals, carnivals are
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organised
in the
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cities
. Even
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peoples
from the rural area
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come
to a city to
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watch
their
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favourite
movies in Cinema Hall and
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Theatres
. Sports stadium, training
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centres
are located
in
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cities
. City life offers too
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many
facilities that are absent in rural
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lives
.

The most
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important
thing is that the city
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provides
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better
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medical
services.
A determiner is probably missing here: "the Best".
Best
hospitals,
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medical
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centres
are built
in
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big
towns
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so
that majority of
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people
can have
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medical
facilities. In these
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centres
, expert doctors, specialist like neurosurgeons, heart surgeon works to treat
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peoples
. These
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medical
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centres
not
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only
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use
advanced machines & instruments
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but
also
offer operation
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theatres
for
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different
types of operations for critical diseases.
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Cities
are safe on health ground and have well-planned sanitation to avoid spreading epidemic.
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Cities
have lifesaving
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medical
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centres
.

In summation, it is
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clear
that city is the
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better
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place
to
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live
. The city not
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only
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provides
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good
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education
and civil life
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but
also
A determiner is probably missing here: "provides the best".
provides best
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medical
facilities.
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IELTS essay Live in the city or in the countryside

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
432 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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