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Live far away from home. what are advantages and disadvantage?

Live far away from home. what are advantages and disadvantage? 7a0Jy

On the other hand, when we live away from home and without parents, we will know how to take care of ourselves and do everything from washing, cleaning to cooking. Something that has been supported by others before. Therefore, we will always consider ourselves financially balance, make money and save for the future. Young people will undergo a dramatic change in emotions, physcials and step into a life full of duties. Especially, missing our family also teach us get on with new roommates or partners and sometimes we must calm enough to stand with their bad habits. Simultaneously, we learn to tolerant, generous as well as respect others. It is a key factor influencing our’s opportunity in career. Finally, after all the ties and control from the family, we have the right to do everything we want. To summarise, the first time living away from home will probably be difficult for some people but don't worry, try your best to overcome whatever problems lying ahead and enjoy this memorable period of your life.

On the other hand
, when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 away from home and without parents, we will know how to take care of ourselves and do everything from washing, cleaning to cooking. Something that has been supported
 by others This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. Therefore
, we will always consider ourselves financially
 balance, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 money and save for the future. Young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will undergo a dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in emotions, Possible spelling mistake found.physicals
physcials
 and step into a life full of duties. Especially
, missing our family also
 teach us This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on with new roommates or partners and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 calm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to stand with their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habits. Simultaneously
, we learn to tolerant, generous as well
 as respect others. It is a key factor influencing Did you mean "our" or "ours"?ourours
our’s
 opportunity in career. Finally
, after all
 the ties and control from the family, we have the right to do everything we want.

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summarise
, the first
 time living away from home will probably
 be difficult for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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but
 don't worry, try your best to overcome whatever problems lying ahead and enjoy this memorable period of your life. 