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Line graph shows that the temprature in Senegal

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İn Overall, it can be seen that temperature has changeable in Senegal. Moreover, the most rainy month was a April and the most rainless month was a June. In January, tepmerature was changed about between 22. 0 and 22. 5. Following this, temperature increased untill Mart and reached about 23. 5. Next step it was continue to deacreasing untill when reached 20. 5 in jule. Then again it risen to 23. 5 in October which it was same to Mart. The last part, temperature begins to decline and was a 21. 5 in December. We can see that Rainfall was the most up level in April while it was a more a 250 millimetres. Following April, some of the most rainly months were regularly Novomber, October, May, Mart. The most rainless month was a Jule which it was a under from 50 millimetrs. After Jule, the most rainless months were orderly August, June, Febrare, January, September, December which all of these were under to 50 millimetrs.
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that temperature has changeable in Senegal. M
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was
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April and the most
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rainless
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was a June.

In January,
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tepmerature
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about between 22. 0 and 22. 5. Following this, temperature increased
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Mart and reached about 23. 5. N
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step it was
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deacreasing
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when reached 20. 5 in
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. Then again it
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to 23. 5 in October which it was same to Mart. The last part, temperature b
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to decline and was a 21. 5 in December.

We can s
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that Rainfall was the most up level in April while it was a more a 250
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millimetres
. Following April, s
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of the most
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rainly
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months
were
regularly
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Novomber
, October, May, Mart. The most
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rainless
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was a
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Jule
which it was
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under from 50
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millimetrs
. After
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IELTS essay Line graph shows that the temprature in Senegal

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
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